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Shay ([personal profile] thewickedquill) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles 2009-05-09 02:05 pm (UTC)

Oh, nicely done!

It really is hard to say what you want when restricted to a certain number of words, particularly when that number is less rather than more. You did a wonderful job, though. Not only did I feel for your Jacob, but also for the friend of old, Aaron, and both boys' suffering. That's powerful considering I had less than 100 words to 'get to know them'.

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