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girlyesterday ([personal profile] girlyesterday) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles2009-09-14 10:24 pm

Prompt 19: Kiss

Title: Going Against Instinct
Challenge/Prompt: #19. Kiss
Original Fiction:
Characters/Pairings: Logan, Ally
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: My original fiction piece


It's indulgent, impulsive and entirely wrong.

She should be disgusted her lips are locked onto Logan, drinking in the taste of coffee and lime cheesecake. She had hated him for years and here she was, playing tongue wrestle with him; goodbye inhibitions, hello recklessness.

This close, she could see the faded freckles on the bridge of his nose. She'd never noticed how long his lashes were, sweeping out in an arc when he closed his eyes.

"Quit staring." his words vibrated inside her mouth, their teeth clinked together, like two glasses of wine. Cheers.

It was so wrong, it felt right.

[personal profile] gussy 2009-09-16 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Totally lovely little snapshot. It's really transporting.
Loved the voice. goodbye inhibitions, hello recklessness.

Also, how cool is the combination of lime cheesecake and coffee! YUM.