zopyrus: roman woman with pearls (roman lady)
zopyrus ([personal profile] zopyrus) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles 2009-05-22 11:26 am (UTC)

I wondered if I should italicize "she"--I tried it without, and the sentence just didn't sound right. I can definitely see why you'd think it was referring to another character. (In fact, if that were the case, I would also have been tempted to italicize it!)

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