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Nichole ([personal profile] iamfiction) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles 2009-05-23 02:48 pm (UTC)

I love asyndeton. Kudos for using it!

The imagery in this is strong and the formatting does lend well to the message of the piece. I guess you could say it's poetry!

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