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rontgenkatze ([personal profile] rontgenkatze) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles2009-06-02 11:12 am

Prompt #4: Drink Drabble: Communion

Title: Communion
Author: [personal profile] rontgenkatze
Prompt: #4 Drink
Original Fiction
Characters: Undisclosed
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Author’s Note: First time poster. All con-crits are welcome, just please be kind. I am a delicate blossom.


“Drink.”

“But, I need a moment to wrap my head around this whole idea.”

“There is nothing to ponder, the options have been clearly defined. There is no time.”

“Your words... they make perfect sense. Turning words into actions is the problem, a big problem.”

“Quickly, it is already beginning to cool. Had I known your predilection for indecision, this opportunity would not have been afforded you.”

“It just reminds me of church in some kind of perverse way.”

“Certainly, it is the oldest tenet of all religions: ‘The blood is the life’. Now drink, before it begins to clot!”
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[personal profile] dokkaebi 2009-06-05 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Normally I en't too fond of all-dialog pieces, but I like this. Great job putting the Big Reveal in the last line, actually made me giggle. ^^