(Late Response) Prompt #76 / "Scavengers"

[ap0cryphal]

Title: "Scavengers"
Challenge/Prompt: #76 / Wasteland
Original Fiction or Fanfiction: Original
Characters/Pairings: N/A
Rating:PG-13 / K+
Warnings: Violence
Disclaimer:  Original work, my own stuffs, etc.
Summary:  "I got friends. You met 'em."
Author's Notes: been away, playing catch-up.

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Vultures found me crossing a dead city: an old hermit gave me shelter.

"There's a castle out there, in the dark," he fiddled with a toolkit. "One of the last shining cities."

One eye blind, the other rusting. Metal scabs and stapled scars: improvised tech. Blind hermit man, how did he know of this shining city? "I got friends. You met 'em."

"The vultures."

"Well, them too," he smiled. I realised he didn't do wetware repair. He did wetware recovery. For self improvement.

He was fast. I was faster. I left him to the unhappy vultures and their electric cackling.

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Comments

[originalpuck]

I really liked this drabble! The glimpse into the world was awesome, and the details you included about the hermit were just right: they gave the enough visuals to see him, with enough missing that I could fill in the details once I got to the turn. :)

[ap0cryphal]

this is only the latest reply ever *facepalm*

creating a narrative in a 100 words...plus worldbuilding, i find it pretty challenging. so it`s very gratifying to get such an insightful comment. plus, i`m very glad you enjoyed the story! :D