originalpuck: Crystal Renn, fat woman submerged to hips in water, running her hands through it. Exposing cleavage. Morgan on it. (Default)
Morgan O'Friel ([personal profile] originalpuck) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles 2011-01-03 07:04 am (UTC)

I really like the tension and the continued sense of horror going on in this piece. I also think you did a great thing by not showing us how it ended: we can imagine any ending we'd like. :)
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