Prompt 84 Ice - Battlefield

[dark_kana]

Title: Battlefield
Challenge/Prompt: 84 Ice
Original Fiction or Fanfiction: Original
Rating: PG
Disclamer : Original work. My own stuff... You know the drill... ^^
Summary: There has always been rivalery between the wielders of Water and Fire.
Author's Notes: I might expand this universe one day. Perhaps. Who knows... 


She shivers when she hears the surface beneath her feet crack. It sounds loud in the darkness of the night.
There is no one near her. No one who’ll hear her scream.
Looking around she wonders if she can make it to the other side of the lake. Wondering if she can run over the ice and throw herself on the safety of the grass. Before the ice completely breaks and allows the cold water to swallow her. Fire has always been her weapon, but it can’t help her now. Who would ever have thought water was going to win…

Comments

[originalpuck]

I really like the tension and the continued sense of horror going on in this piece. I also think you did a great thing by not showing us how it ended: we can imagine any ending we'd like. :)

[dark_kana]

Thank you! ^^ I'm glad you liked it! For a moment I feared 100words were not enough to bring everything across what I wanted...