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ap0cryphal ([personal profile] ap0cryphal) wrote in [community profile] fiction_drabbles2011-06-10 12:58 pm

Succor

Title: "Succor"
Challenge/Prompt: #107 / Lick
Original Fiction or Fanfiction: Original
Characters/Pairings: N/A
Rating: PG-13 / K+
Warnings: Violence
Disclaimer:  Original work, my own stuffs, etc.
Summary:  Are you here to kill me?
Author's Notes:  kinda-sorta-maybe related to #77: Child by the Pyre and #78: Child by the Waters. also, this feels kinda incomplete. :/ 

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The angel makes landfall on black wings, her eyes trailing smoke and her swords blazing fire. Around her, charred corpses and ivory minarets reach for darkening skies.

"Are you here to kill me?"

A boy, old eyes and tattered robes. Trembling hands.

In answer she dims her swords and sheathes her wings. Kneeling, she reaches for him.

"To save you. I promised your mother..."

The child smiles, silver teeth agleam, and kisses her wrist. Sandpaper tongue rasps over new flesh.

"Sweet angel, I made kindling of my mother."

Tongue pierces and child feeds.

The angel weeps, in bliss and horror.

[personal profile] royalarchivist 2011-06-13 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
"and sheathes her wings"

Ooh! I like this turn of phrase. Well done. :)

[personal profile] enchantedlands 2011-06-16 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely twist, and in so short a space too! Love it.
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[personal profile] insomniac_tales 2011-06-17 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
This is gripping and fantastic.