Original: Foreshadowing

[dorkpie]

Title: Foreshadowing
Challenge/Prompt: #10 Fate
Original Fiction
Characters/Pairings: Santiago/Jason, Michael
Rating: PG
Warnings: M/M relationship? Other than that, nothing...
Disclaimer: Mine.
Summary: Michael saw this coming years ago.
Author's Notes: Part of this universe. Which is, imo, getting too big. D:


"I spent the night at Santi's," Jason tells him on a Sunday morning, his voice sounding foreign over the speaker. "He's making some weird Mexican shit for breakfast."

Jason sounds disgusted, but Michael, who has spent his entire life deciphering the sum and all his parts, knows that what Jason isn't saying is more important than the words coming out of his mouth.

He also knows that Jason has never stayed long enough for someone to cook him breakfast.

This has been a long time coming, Michael thinks, closing his eyes, and practicing a smile that doesn't betray his bitterness.

Comments

[rebelliouswhitequeen]

For me, it wasn't really so much not having a lot of adjectives-- it's just, I have a really hard time describing and saying what I really mean. One of my writing friends said maybe I was getting too specific, but... I dunno. o_O

X3 <3

[dorkpie]

Ahh, I know what you mean. Kind of. :/ That's like, a writing paradox/cycle. Um. Paradoxycle? <__<

[rebelliouswhitequeen]

/giggles/ x3

[dorkpie]

I-it's a word! XD;;