Open Letter - think I read through that in about one breath. Frenetic pacing, as it should be. That bit about "i hope you exist / statistics" made me laugh - the narrator's tone hits just that right mix of hope and desperation. :)
Price of Admission - :[ there's such a weight to this. torn between not wanting her to hear the answer, because it would be horrifying, and between wanting her to hear the answer, because same reason.
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Date: 2012-03-05 05:47 pm (UTC)Open Letter - think I read through that in about one breath. Frenetic pacing, as it should be. That bit about "i hope you exist / statistics" made me laugh - the narrator's tone hits just that right mix of hope and desperation. :)
Price of Admission - :[ there's such a weight to this. torn between not wanting her to hear the answer, because it would be horrifying, and between wanting her to hear the answer, because same reason.