I really like the imagery of this piece. I could smell the sea on the breeze. I think what I liked the most is the mystery. Obviously, he's dead... but she's burying him at sea, not his ashes, but his body. Is she a murderer? Is she complying with his last wishes, to be cast upon the waters?
Excellent work in only one hundred words, my friend.
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Date: 2009-06-05 09:06 pm (UTC)Obviously, he's dead... but she's burying him at sea, not his ashes, but his body. Is she a murderer? Is she complying with his last wishes, to be cast upon the waters?
Excellent work in only one hundred words, my friend.