I love your strong sensory details--the smell and the sounds of the car, the feel of the twine on Amelia's wrists. (This is something I am personally bad at remembering to describe, or imagine, so my hat is off!)
Your sentence about Simon is a little confusing--from the context, I think it must be something Amelia is thinking, but it sounds more remote, like general narration. Was Amelia the person who couldn't find him?
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Date: 2009-05-20 02:51 pm (UTC)Your sentence about Simon is a little confusing--from the context, I think it must be something Amelia is thinking, but it sounds more remote, like general narration. Was Amelia the person who couldn't find him?