You do a great job in drabble #2 of weaving the physical description, from the present, with the past family narrative. And it's really satisfying, in the last sentence, to finally find out what exactly he's carving--I'm glad you held off this detail until the very end.
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Date: 2009-05-12 01:59 am (UTC)