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Title: No Regard
Challenge/Prompt: #4, Drink
Original Fiction or Fanfiction [Name of fandom]: original

Rating: G
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: none
Summary: Bully stomps toad.
Author's Notes: More than 100 words would do this story better justice.

I had been disgusted with the vile girl three years my junior for the entirety of the family reunion. Her manners were atrocious, her demeanor obnoxious. She was the center of all trouble that existed.

The straw that broke the camel’s back was when she stomped the toad. I watched in utter disbelief, frozen to the spot and shaking at the sight of that toad suddenly flat and oozing on the walk. She cackled and scraped her shoe.

Later that day, I spat in her drink strangely satisfied, but confident the toad still got the worse end of the deal.

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Date: 2009-06-01 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] iamfiction
That paints a horrible, vivid picture... of a poor, innocent toad. I'd spit in that girl's drink too if she did that. And I'd then de-pants her later on after that.

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Date: 2009-06-01 10:06 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sideways
*Dry* I think being Australian makes me notably less traumatised at the notion of stomping on toads than I probably should be. Nonetheless, I do love that last line - a nice twist for the drink prompt.

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